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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jun 30, 2011 14:51:43 GMT -5
This is my progress thread to talk about my novel of the dark retold novel ideas of the little red ridding hood, i came up with the ideas for my dark retold novel of the little red ridding hood. After waking up in the morning from my sleep of dreaming of ideas. Which to me causes insomnia from waking up at certain times of the morning while the night is still before dawn comes.
I will keep my progress up and update my progress in this thread for July and to talk about my ideas and plot lines along. With posting a summary. Soon of my dark retold novel of the little red ridding hood. and while working on the other retold fairy tale novels of Sleeping Beauty and Snow White.
Besides working on some more writing projects for July. And trying to edit, rewrite, edit and write some while plan and pants through my novels at the same time.
As well i will work on two poems and some fanfics which to me which is also writing projects to work on. While also i am going to make a goal of losing weight. Reading five or six books to complete at the same time. For six weeks and challenge myself to write at the same time and hope everything i will write soon will become published some day.
I will also be posting updates of my every day life besides writing soon come July.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jun 30, 2011 17:59:05 GMT -5
Besides this one and the other ones i said in my progress thread to work on for July. I am going to be working on a new fantasy novel that has to do with a man yearning for his freedom. And a female prostitute learning to find out the truth of the crimes and prove his innocence all within the magical empire called Sunset. With an ancient evil brewing and coming back to life later on.
Which to me helped me out from the story generator on seventh sanctum. And decided to take the ideas. To come up with a new fantasy story novel, featuring my thoughts and what will happen in the novel in it. Which i hope will work out in the end for me or i will have to drop the idea if i am out of brain power to think scenes up for it.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 1, 2011 18:32:13 GMT -5
I am starting to be halfway done with planning and pantsing my way through my novels as i write them for this year that i hope i can work out something to be at a starting word count to continue from there once i post in the word count thread for this month.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 1, 2011 22:47:49 GMT -5
Here is an excerpt from my new retold dark telling of the little red ridding hood novel called A Watcher In The Night.
A young woman wearing a long red cape with the hood covering her face. Along with wearing her dress and stockings in her black dress shoes. She carried a gun in one of the pockets of her dress hidden away with a basket filled with necessities to travel. With along with a backpack on her other shoulder. As she traveled through the forest weary of whatever will happen to her.
If she will meet a stranger as she is walking along the forest path. To walk straight towards her families place in the deserted forest of the here. Now where she has heard rumors about the forest. She is now walking through filled with strangers who prey on the young and innocent to take away their souls. To eat their flesh to gain immortality.
More of the rumors spoke of being kidnapped to serve the king of the dark realm. Inside the forest where he is looking for his bride to come to him. However, the last rumors specifically stated a wolf in sheep’s clothing who is part man and part wolf. Who also preys on the young and try to steal a soul at first glance. If he wants you to see him after he captures a human to take to his lair.
The young woman arrived at her cottage house after coming out of the forest unscathed and unharmed finding no danger in the forest. After she crossed the field to come to her home. She opened the door to her home and pulled down the hood covering her head and face.
To reveal a green blue eyes woman with long dark maroon hair and nails running through her long hair painted red and black. She taken off her cape and hung it on the coat rack by the door. She walked further in the room after closing her front door to see everything is set in place she asked for.
She wondered where everyone went to after setting up everything in her home. As she looked around for them she found a ribbon from her niece on the floor with a little bit of blood on it.
She wondered what she will do when she finds her niece and if her niece is injured or is something worse maybe dead. She shuddered at the thought she still wondered where everybody is. Considering they are supposed to wait for her here after she came home.
She turned everywhere she walked in her home opening doors and looking in closets to find out where everyone is at. Until she smelt blood coming from one of the last rooms she did not look into yet. She gently opened the door noticing how bright the room is. Only to find her niece and a few others mauled and mutilated to death in the room.
She felt tears come to her eyes as she noticed blood everywhere in the room. She quickly closed the door and started to think about something else. To try to keep from not vomiting up on the floor from being sick of what she has sees in the room.
She held the tears back not wanting to let them fall as she wonder where everyone else is and if their dead as well or still alive. On the other hand, escaped from the horrific scenes in her home. She knew she has to grab the bodies, and wrap them up in sheets.
To bury them in her backyard while trying to not let the weakness. Of the tears show on her face. She decided to find some sheets from a closet to wrap her relatives and friends up in while trying to control the smell of the blood in the room. She found them in and not puke from it.
After she grabbed some sheets, she walked back into the room walked straight up to the first deceased person who is her niece. She put the sheet next to her on the blood soaked bed.
She carefully grabbed her niece to lay her on the half-bloody sheet. She tried not to look at her eyes as she moved her hand to bring her niece’s eyelids closed and not has her eyes open. She begins to wrap her niece in the sheet, she has for her after covering her niece in the final piece of the sheet. She grabbed her gently and brought her out of the room.
As she walked with her to bring her through the backdoor of her home to her yard. Where she will put her in the ground by the garden near the flowers her niece loved so much. After she set her niece by the flowers wrapped in a sheet. She quickly walked back inside to grab more sheets she left by the door of the room to walk back into the room.
To wrap two of her relatives in the two sheets, she has in her hands. That look like their throats were ripped out and blood is everywhere on them. After she wrapped them in the sheets, she carefully dragged them out of the door of the room and towards the backdoor to walk out to the backyard to bury them next to her niece.
Then after she laid them next to her niece, she went back inside to grab a few more sheets. By the door to wrap the rest of her relatives and friends. In to drag them one or two at a time outside the backdoor to be in the backyard to bury them underneath the trees and flowers.
She will pray they do not come back alive after she hears the legend of the dead coming back alive from an animal attack. She knew she must kill them if they ever came back alive.
After she carried the last two to three relatives and friends out to her backyard, she begins to dig the ground up just as she grabs for a shovel to dig six feet deep into the ground to bury them and make a marker for them who passed away in her home.
She buried them one by one, she quickly and calmly walked back inside to clean up the smell of the blood. To burned the sheets and blankets with the blood on them outside of her home. To be free of the blood and have her home smell like bleach.
After she cleaned her whole house for three hours, she decided to rest for a while. Inside her bedroom laying on the bed and dream of the good times where she will be able to picture her life. With her family and friends in her dreams as she sleeps for the rest of the day and into the night.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 2, 2011 9:46:05 GMT -5
I will be working hard on my novels that i picked for July today for this month and work hard on them to finally goal of 50k.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 2, 2011 10:56:18 GMT -5
Yeah, i am at 2k for my novel for my progress thread that i picked and will be at 2.1k soon after i am done with 2.1k i will be at 2.5k.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 3, 2011 13:22:34 GMT -5
I am at 2.1k for my A Watcher In The Night novel that i am working on which is a retold novel of the little red ridding hood.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 3, 2011 13:49:37 GMT -5
I am at 2.2k now and will be closer to be at 2.3k finally the afterwards be at 2.5k soon.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 8, 2011 18:14:56 GMT -5
I am at 2.3k now and will work my way up towards a higher word count as i continue to write for today.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 8, 2011 19:29:37 GMT -5
If anybody thinks i mostly have my stories and novel ideas from generators i don't it is just the writer's block. I have to make my fantasy novel and i am writing a bit of it. However, i am working hard on my other novels not just my fantasy one and a watcher in the night. Just to let anyone know i am still working on those i am just starting to have more ideas to make more WIPS into novels or novellas.
Maybe for both sometimes so just to let everyone know. I do not take all my novels or the ideas i have from them. From any of the generators on the seventh sanctum. Because i sometimes have writers block so i have to go through some ideas and stuff for my novels through some generators. So i do not take credit for what the generators come up with. I just have ideas from them to spark something for my novels or novels i am going to create.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 10, 2011 23:34:55 GMT -5
So far i am trying to lose more weight, to be closer at 197 or 195 soon. I am at 199 i think from the last time i weighed myself last night to find out how much pounds i lost. I will want to lose more pounds with keep doing exercises. With trying to drink less soda with more flavored water. Tea, or regular water besides Gatorade or powerade.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 11, 2011 17:17:15 GMT -5
So far i am working hard on my writing for A watcher in the night which is a dark retold novel idea of the "Little Red Riding Hood". i am now at 2.3k however i am trying to still write with coming up with ideas for the scenes and plot twists for it to happen in my novel to make it work.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 13, 2011 17:43:54 GMT -5
For later in this afternoon i am almost reaching 3k then i will be at 10k through the times. Afterwards leading towards more higher word counts for later in this afternoon.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 16, 2011 11:39:29 GMT -5
I am working on more then one novel and fanfic today as the system called for multitasking for myself. I will however try to write more of my original novel for this progress thread. And then post more excerpts to it besides the fantasy one when i am done writing the chapters to both of them.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jul 23, 2011 21:31:46 GMT -5
I am writing more of my novel out of my other ones for this month though i will continue to write more of my novel. And my other ones before this month ends or before tonight is 10PM or 11PM either.
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