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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 2, 2011 16:30:02 GMT -5
Part of the title says it all, my darkness beneath love novel is a retold novel of my favorite movie Snow White. I think i will post an summary and then an excerpt in my next post because i decided to write this for August and I want to accomplish something by writing my novel and see where it takes me from there with coming up new ideas, plots, characters, and many other scenes as well.
I will also work on my other one and a few more novels besides fanfics old and new besides old novels as well. The one i want to work on besides this one and the others is the one with the longest title called A Young Man's Courage Is Another Woman's Truth.
Besides this one i am going to finish writing my post apocalyptic novels and another retold fairy tale novel that is dark like the one i am going to be focused on that is the title of my progress thread.
Called Gift Of Dreams which is a retold fairy tale novel of Sleeping Beauty. I will also work on other retold fairy tale novels in the coming months as well. Please look forward to my next post when i post an excerpt from my novel that i am working on for this month.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 2, 2011 17:13:19 GMT -5
Here is the summary and excerpt to my novel Darkness Beneath Love!
Hannah nicknamed Snow White for her pale skin, long dark hair, and ruby red lips plays with her six sisters. When she wonders what her stepmother is up to as she quietly and quickly leaves her sisters to walk up the tower silently.
What she finds at the room where her stepmother is at. She hears a voice tell her stepmother that Hannah herself is the most beautiful of all. With panicking Hannah quickly and quietly walks fast down the tower and walks back into the room.
Where her six sisters are to find out they are in dining room eating lunch. Hannah walks to the dining room and sits with her father and her six sisters to eat lunch.
Until their stepmother appears and gives Hannah an interesting look. What she does not know is her stepmother has plans for her death to still be reigned beautiful of all out of the whole castle.
When Hannah is by herself without her sisters a hunter her stepmother assigns with her is going to kill her. But he hesitates and drops the dagger he is supposed to kill her with.
He tells her to leave and never return and that her six sisters will be safe and not harmed in the castle. And he tells her the her stepmother Queen Veronica is after her wanting her dead.
She panics and runs into the forest upon hours later arriving at a cottage belonging to the seven men. Who later in the story she falls in love with the oldest of the seven men.
Her stepmother is killed while being in disguise to poison her which she does but awakens by the kiss from the eldest of the seven men.
She travels back with him and his men to the castle where her father becomes worried. She notices her sisters are under the same spell and with the six men kiss the six sisters.
Who wake up and later she and her six sisters marry the seven men. With an epilogue telling her and her sisters with their husbands and their children in different houses. Are going to the castle to visit their father who is old now. He will need someone to take over ruling the castle for him. Which leaves to be Hannah and her husband who is the eldest of the seven men.
Now for the excerpt: Hannah and her six sisters are sitting around the fire reading and sewing. When Hannah decides to explore the castle away from her sisters to see what their stepmother is up to in the high tower of the castle.
She quietly sneaked upstairs into the high tower of the castle mindful not to make a noise. As she climbs the stairs two at time, careful not to alert their stepmother she is in the high tower.
Where she wanted to find out what their stepmother her does up here. She quietly crept to the doorway being half open as she looks into the room to find her stepmother in front of a mirror asking it questions.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 2, 2011 18:42:55 GMT -5
I am working on my novel so far and i am still at the beginning of it but i will continue to write more of it today.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 2, 2011 21:44:25 GMT -5
I am at 1.1k today however since it is nighttime now i am going to still work on writing more of my novel to where i will be at 5k by tonight. Before 3 or 4AM in the morning where i will be at more words before going to bed at 5AM.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 3, 2011 1:21:55 GMT -5
I am going to post my word count soon after posting it in the word count thread first from how much i have written tonight which is now 1AM in the morning.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 3, 2011 20:52:16 GMT -5
I will write more of my novel today in the evening and into the night within midnight and early morning hours of the morning too.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 4, 2011 7:43:22 GMT -5
I written a bit more of my novel today ending with a 1.2k words. Nevertheless i will write more and more of my novel to be in the higher words count today.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 4, 2011 19:20:24 GMT -5
I written a little bit more and i am at 1.3k now. However, i want to be at 3k then 6k afterwards as i continue to write more and more today.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 5, 2011 11:38:13 GMT -5
I plan to write more and more words in my novel today in the afternoon. Followed by writing more in the midday, nighttime, and early morning hours until 4 or 5AM in the morning.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 6, 2011 0:44:41 GMT -5
With tonight now morning at 12:41AM. I will write and continue to write more this morning in the early hours until 4 or 5AM in the morning. Maybe 6AM in the morning when i stop and go to sleep then wake up to write more again. Which i want to be at 5k this morning and continue on from here.
Anyways what i am doing still writing on the forums i should start writing now. However, in another note i am drinking less soda only one soda a day or night and more Gatorade, Powerade. Besides flavor water in water bottles or regular water bottles to drink i weigh 206 instead of 203. Nevertheless, i want to be have my weight at 199 or 197.
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Post by gio on Aug 8, 2011 1:28:40 GMT -5
Marie I believe that you have to face that your weight loss routine does not work. You have to replace it with something that works. Remember. You have plenty of time (but not infinite). Gio.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 11, 2011 19:16:30 GMT -5
Thanks for the advice Gio, i walked for a few hours with my cousin from my cousin's house to the mall Tuesday to see Captain America. As for Sunday i walked out of the house with just my anger and cell phone. No water bottle because of my relative complaining to much which had me on my last nerve.
But, i got scolded by my mom because of my heart problem with a whole in my heart and that with walking like that Sunday it could have been bad for me especially with nothing to drink. However, i tend to exercise more since at my cousin's house staying there for half the week. I drank mostly juice and water less soda and had more exercise from walking. Which i never stepped on the scale at their house so i do not know what i weigh now.
Nevertheless, i want to lose more weight and keep weight off to where i want to be at 199 or 197 pounds. By the time i exercise more and lose more weight to try and be skinny again. Well, not to skinny to where i will show my bones because that's bad.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 12, 2011 22:50:45 GMT -5
I will be writing more of my novel and wanting to be at 5k and more words in my novel tonight before 2 or 3AM in the morning. Where i will go to sleep at 5 or 6 after writing for a little more in my novel. Then continue to write more once i wake up from my sleep in the morning.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 16, 2011 15:18:39 GMT -5
I plan to write more of my novel and be at 6k soon after writing more words in it besides working on my other novels. Fanfics and short stories to be done with the chapters to them with working hard on what to do for more scenes for them too.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Aug 18, 2011 15:54:10 GMT -5
I will plan to meditate and exercise some more besides writing some more in my novel and other novels old and new. With old and new fanfics, short stories and new writing projects. Besides the novel i am working on and the other one i will work on for here as well which is a gift of dreams.
I have plans that i can do these writing projects two at the same time to be done with each chapter in each short story, fanfic. Or novel and hope that i can be done with more chapters to them before this month ends.
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